Internship Final Wrap

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The end of my internship has arrived.  I had a few weeks of light work and fortunately had hours remaining to read the April contest submissions.

May 4th 3.5 hrs (organized postcards and posters for college to display, read submitted stories to website, commented, shared on Facebook SOL Page)

May 6th 2 hr (checked email for contest stories from Eric, posted on Facebook SOL Page, shared writer’s quotes)

May 7th 4 hrs (read April contest submissions, commented, liked, shared, registered for the Blogging seminar at Philadelphia Writer’s Conference, taking SOL info to distribute)

May 9th 2 hrs (read April contest submissions, commented, liked, shared)

May 10th 3 hrs (chose top 10 from Eric’s email and responded, posted a story to the college category, tweeted new contest information, participated in the Mother’s Day Tweet contest)

My hours for internship have been fulfilled but as a favor to Eric, I will help choose the finalists for the April writing contest and distribute SOL fliers in Philadelphia in June.

Though my internship is complete, I will still contribute to the Stage of Life blogging community.  It was a pleasure to work for Eric Thiegs and Stage of Life and I look forward to a long-lasting, writing relationship.

Blog On,

Pattie

The Amish Mafia Conspiracy~ 21st Century Reality TV

They've been around.  The English just didn't need to know it.

They’ve been around. The English just didn’t need to know it.

AM Conspiracy <——click here to read how Amish Mafia came about!!!

This paper was educational and enjoyable to create.  Even if Esther won’t speak to me anymore.  Why, I’m not sure….

~P.

Recommendation Letter that secured a scholarship

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Never hesitate to ask a professor to write a letter of recommendation on your behalf to secure a scholarship.

All it took was an essay about myself and my writing goals, an example of my writing, and this letter by Dr. Shusko.

Crider Rec  <—- click here to read it

I’m very excited to be participating in the Philadelphia Writer’s Conference next month!

~P.

York’s Uncharted Territory

An Insider Look at a Swinger’s Club

CLICK HERE——————> Profile CSC <————-CLICK HERE ClubImageLarge_769_298488

Five was the magic number

Five was the magic number, not required, but I went with it…

            I have chosen five essays to include in my creative nonfiction, final portfolio.  Four because they are strong pieces and the fifth piece to prove (to myself) that I am able to edit my own work.  Nonfiction writing is my personal preference to read and write.  This course has enabled me to create work in many nonfiction genres.  As a blogger writing about my life nearly daily, this experience at several “hands” of nonfiction work has improved my self-published, online posts.  The five essays in this portfolio best represent my work achieved through workshops in the classroom and professor comments on previous drafts.  Most importantly, these pieces represent my nonfiction voice.

The first essay, York’s Uncharted Territory, is my favorite and the piece I’m most proud of, because it is risky and risqué and I imagine unique, compared to most profile pieces submitted for this course.  My strength as a writer is edginess and the forwardness of my voice.  I dare to be different and take chances with my work.  During the workshop process of this draft, my classmates were surprised when I agreed to visit this club and get a first-hand experience.  As a writer, this was a challenge for me: to visit and write about a taboo place.  I jumped in, ready to live it, so I can tell it.  The result of the entire writing and workshop process developed into an exemplary profile of York’s secret club.

The second essay, Quattrone’s Tornado Experience, was the easiest to write because Rebecca Quattrone was an excellent subject to interview.  In this piece I deleted paragraphs of unnecessary print and web links to reduce the cluttered look.  Quattrone was a fountain of fascinating and emotionally moving quotes.  Her quotes made this piece flow and made it a genuine, human-interest story.  I was surprised and proud when Quattrone told me I “rocked it” and she would be attaching the piece to her online profile.  The interview assignment was a great learning experience, and personally rewarding for me and Quattrone.

The third essay, Disney’s Over-rated, was just a little slice of my life.  This piece did not need much revision to the original.  I enjoyed sharing this memoir, because I felt relief as I typed angrily on my keyboard.  The little mishaps of life, the funny moments, and spurts of anger and streams of tears, all make for memoir moments.  When I laugh, I write.  When I cry, I write. When I am annoyed, I write cool.  The sarcasm and snark of this piece work in place of hot, angry, words or thoughts.  Writing memoirs, for a fact, keeps me out of jail.

The fourth essay, You have a Sexy Dash!, is a representation of my blogging style.  This short piece allowed me to express myself through my favorite punctuation.  As an assignment, it was ironic, as I dislike punctuation and believe it is overused and generally unnecessary.  My weakness is punctuation, due to my disregard.  I know when and where comas are placed, I just don’t like the pause they create in my sentence flow.  Fortunately, my disregard for comas did not appear to affect my grade.  This prompt has created an idea for a story format in a new piece.  One without punctuation

The fifth essay, What Happened to the Good People?, is my proof I can edit.  I was extremely long-winded in this piece and reduced it by nearly half.  This was rewarding, though difficult, process.  Editing out large amount of material moved the action forward, getting to the rant and cutting out the unnecessary details of the trip to the mall.  I was excessive in the description of my day prior to the incident leading to the rant.  After “removing the fat” from this piece, a much leaner, more focused rant appeared.

This course was an excellent outlet for my nonfiction writing.  The guidance from my peers and professors was academically rewarding, as well as, personally rewarding.  As a result, my confidence has grown and I look forward to using my newly gained and groomed skills in the future work of my academic career.  Travel writing is my dream and nonfiction is my ticket there.

Internship Week 14 & 15

April 26  4 hrs

Worked from home.  Wrote Five Tips for New Bloggers.  Began writing column headings for Stage of Life features

Began article on the Writing Workshop held by Ben Percy at York College campus.

Read new posts on Stage of Life, commented and shared on Facebook.

 

May 3rd  4 hrs

Worked from office.

Shared my portfolio for internship to Eric.

Discussed new writing contest for May.

Read April’s contest entries.  Chose a winner from the On My Own and Baby categories.

Wrote headings for blogging articles.

Wrote intro to Grandparent Editor Welcome page.

Received a check for $50 towards the Philadelphia Writer’s Conference in June.  Postcards to take with me to distribute during conference.

Total 8 hours.  22.5 hrs – 8 hrs = 14.5 hours remaining

Amish Mafia Presentation

They've been around.  The English just didn't need to know it.

They’ve been around. The English just didn’t need to know it.

Click here——–>AmishMafia Crider Religious Studies<————Click here

The Veracity of Reality Television in the 21st Century

The Amish Mafia Conspiracy

Patricia A. Crider

Religion 368

Professor Christa Shusko

 

Evil Dead: The Gory and the Groovy

Movie Review by Philip RearichImage

Rating: 5/5

Directed by: Fede Alvarez

Produced by: Sam Raimi, Bruce Campbell, Robert G. Tapert

Written by: Fede Alvarez, Rodo Sayagues, Diablo Cody (uncredited)

Starring: Jane Levy as Mia

Shiloh Fernandez as David

Lou Taylor Pucci as Eric

Jessica Lucas as Olivia

Elizabeth Blackmore as Natalie

Bruce Campbell as Ash (uncredited)

I want to make one thing perfectly clear about this movie: it’s not a remake. Despite what you may have heard about it, it’s not a remake. This is just my opinion on it, from speculation before it came out, and after seeing it, I’m convinced it’s not a remake of the 1981 horror classic The Evil Dead. With that said, it’s not exactly a sequel either, albeit not a direct one. I would say it loosely follows the previous movies. What really describes this movie is that it’s more of a revival of the franchise. Not a remake, not exactly a reboot or sequel, but a revival. This movie brings the franchise back to its straight-up horror roots, rather than the horror-comedy that the sequels were. Also, I think the difference in titling for both films kinda signifies how it’s not a remake (the original had “The” in the title, this one doesn’t).

I was amazed by this film. Truly I was. When I first heard about it, I thought that there was no way it was going to happen. The original film, along with the rest of the trilogy, is iconic and a cult classic. There have been so many horror remakes, few of them being good, but the bad ones are bad in their own way that just remaking The Evil Dead would be a slap to the face to horror fans and fans of the franchise as well. Then I heard that the movie was actually being made, and it had the involvement of Sam Raimi, Bruce Campbell, and others that helped make the original film as well as the sequels. Even Bruce Campbell said it was going to be good, and, well, he delivered as promised and so much more.

It’s almost hard to describe this movie, really. The only word that comes to mind is brutal. That’s the best way to describe it. Imagine all the characteristics of a Michael Bay remake or any bad horror remake in general, and this movie is the exact opposite of that. It’s that good. It has the premise of the original film, a bunch of people at a cabin who get attacked by demons, and they have to survive it until it’s over. It does have the look of a remake, very dirty and grimy, gore, uh, galore, and emphasizing a lot on the scare factor, which to this film’s credit does very well. As I am a horror fan, I wasn’t really scared by it like most people I know, but it did have really shocking moments. Also, that “tree-raping” scene from the original that had its own rendition in this film? It is a lot more graphic in this film, but that’s only a tiny bit of how brutal this movie really is.

Now, there are moments that will shock, scare, frighten, and anything else fear-related that will make you feel fear in this movie. The constant attacks from the characters being possessed onto their friends, the brutality of the execution of those attacks, and the surrealism of it all. Heck, the film begins with a bunch of people trying to free a possessed person and she seems nice, but then she just says “I will eat your soul” in such a nice way but then goes demonic. Then later the environment gets all freaky. There’s dead cats, originally thought to be just a “bad smell” and a delusion from Mia, but she turned out to be right. And the demon, well that was a little strange in more ways than one. When it possesses Mia, it turns her into a combination of a deadite, Gollum, and something from The Grudge or The Ring, I don’t know. It’s weird and quirky but still quite frightening, especially the ways in which she frightens people.

Now of course, like with the original film, the demon was released by the characters kinda being stupid with the THINGS THAT THEY SHOULD NOT MESS WITH aka the evil book. I mean, it’s all unleashed by a teacher, a guy who appears to be a hipster, Woodstockian guy with glasses, beard, long hair, and everything, yet he still continues to screw everything up by opening a book wrapped in a garbage bag (I guess), having barb wire attached to it so that anyone would have a hard time opening it if they were stupid enough to open it, and then read the book when there are clear instructions NOT TO READ IT. Then of course almost everyone is against Mia for believing that there’s evil demons out there, thinking that it’s her drug addiction, and they get their comeuppance for really helping her out, though they were in their own way. Heck, her saying “You’re all going to die tonight” pretty much sums up their fates. Though I am sad for David and in some way Eric, even though he was an idiot for unleashing literally Hell on Earth.

Still, this is a great horror film. Again, it’s not a remake, but a revival, bringing the franchise to what it was in the first place. Having the sequels to the original being more comedic was inventive and iconic and will remain so, but I can’t still get over the fact how awesome this film was due to its brutal horror nature. And if you don’t believe me that it’s not a remake, just stay through and after the credits. If nothing in the film indicated that it wasn’t a remake, then that will. Not gonna say anything more, only that it will. And it pretty much gives you a good idea of what will come next in different ways. Groovy (really wanted to say that).

Just remember this: Good, bad, I’m the one who reviewed this movie for The Spartan (sue me, I really wanted to work that other awesome Ash Williams line from Army of Darkness).

So you want to blog?

So You Want to Blog?

            You have made the decision to blog.  This decision may have taken some time to develop, but now that you are firm with intent, what do you do?

  1. Surf the Internet to find a website where you will want your blog.  There are more blogging sites on the Internet than can be possibly named.  If having your own blog domain is not your goal, a blogging community, such as Stage of Life, is an excellent place to start.  It is free, easy to register and always has great prizes for winners of their numerous writing contests.

 

  1. Browse blogging sites and read what people are writing.  Blogging is open to any topic and if having readers follow what you write is not a priority, no worries.  If you do want to gain a following of readers, subscribers, fans and haters; write about current topics and give your own thoughts and opinions. A following will magically develop based on what you write and how available you make it on the Internet.

 

  1. Pay attention to how the writers have their blog site formatted.  Thousands of templates can be found to format your own website.  Don’t underestimate simplistic templates as the flashier ones are distracting to readers.  Colorful solids high-light your blog content while abstract, multiple colors and photos clutter your blog.

 

  1. Write on paper, five to ten words that would represent the categories on your blog.  These categories should be able to contain many topics.  On a personal blog site, posts are tagged, making each post unique within the assigned category.  If posting on a community blog site, choose one category that you fall into when submitting a story.  A community such as Stage of Life lists ten categories where anyone writing will be part of at least one.

 

  1. Register on the blogging site of your choice.  Set aside any fears you might still have about writing your first post.  Nearly every blogger starts their first post announcing it as their first post.  There is no shame to start with that announcement, so run with it. Millions of bloggers started exactly where you are right now: having made the decision to write and share your thoughts and ideas with the world.

 

Still need ideas to blog about?  Check out these helpful blog sites & writing prompts:

Prompts:

http://dailybloggingideas.com/10-blog-ideas-in-10-minutes-or-less/

http://www.stageoflife.com/AskAQuestion.aspx

http://blog.hubspot.com/blog/tabid/6307/bid/26638/10-Ways-to-Never-Run-Out-of-Blog-Ideas-Again.aspx

 

Sites:

www.stageoflife.com

www.blogger.com

www.wordpress.com

www.blog-ideas.com

Internship Weeks 12 & 13

April 12th  3 hrs

Read the 35 submitted posts for the March writing contest.  Chose top ten.

April 15th  .5 hrs

Chose top three for March writing contest.

April 19th 3.5 hrs

In office work.  Wrote original post for SOL website featuring blogging sites and writing prompts.

Discussed SOL future with Eric and my possible assistance after internship.  Received $50 in sponsorship money from SOL to Philadelphia Writer’s Conference.  Will be taking SOL material with me to distribute.

Total hours 7 hours.  29.5 hours – 7hrs = 22.5 hours remaining

Next week-meet with Dr. Yonker to discuss portfolio.

~P.